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I'm quite surprised Flea came back right away. I thought J was going to play a much bigger role than he was (he still might!) but we've gotten our partner in crime back. He's a strange one. So far, his demeanor had been pretty irreverent and easy going, but it must've really bothered him what he said to Mc, that it brought him back. That's a new side to him we've not seen before, the sympathy, the empathy.

Ilyana was sure a piece of work. I got so mad at being kicked in the face LOL. And I couldn't do a thing about it. So far, there hasn't really been much of a chance for Mc and Flea to really get to know each other (or rather my MC wasn't willing to confide in Flea about her dead family for example) or to work together, really, but this situation forced Mc to put a lot of faith and trust in Flea, putting themselves in his hands while navigating the club, requiring them to work together. 

Actually, it was Flea saying there were a lot of moments where it felt like Mc wasn't looking out for him that I realized that he was relying on them too, because this entire plan hinged on Mc playing into the act that they were performing. /I/ was playing it like 'well,i have to play along because i'm a professional and i'm not gonna jeopardize the job", and i hadn't really thought until that moment that Flea had placed his wellbeing in Mc's hands as well. There's been a shift in their relationship now, they bled for each other, tended to each other's needs.

There's a lot that Mc is not aware of, regarding demons, and from the pieces of info revealed to us, it seems like the demons that are stuck on the human world have to play it very carefully, stick to the rules to remain, otherwise there's big consequences to be had. Flea made it seem like it was rare for demons to kill humans, or do anything that would draw attention. Ilyana had abandoned that caution but Flea very much keeps those guidelines in the back of his head. Even though he's livng it rough, he still wouldn't dare cross those lines the way she did. (So the mystery of Mc's family's deaths persist. What caused that kind of incident to occur?)

Ngl. it was /really/ funny catching him jerking off miserably. Fascinated at the fact that masturbation, to demons is considered auto-cannibalism. It makes sense! Sexual energy is food, it's just a meal to them, so they don't need to do it. Does it just not feel good then? It clearly requires another individual, a human to work.

Oh my god. We fed him eggs. Has he ever used a toilet before?? He's put something organic in his body for the first time, does he need to poop. Is his body functional???

Furthermore, I can't believe Flea was just rawdogging human society without the internet at his disposal. No human food to snack on like junk food, no electronics to mess around on for a couple minutes? Is this all he's been doing the past decade? Horrors.

Now i played a very in platonic with Ted MC, and im delighted that he's become aware of Flea's existence at the most inopportune time but thinking of an Mc who is secretly in love with Ted, having him witness the kiss between Flea and Mc is giving me a chuckle. 

Great development for Flea and Mc, let's see where it goes

It's truly fascinating--getting to see how your and your detective's relationship with Flea develops with each chapter.

I don't know if the questions you posed were rhetorical or not, but I'll answer the toilet one with a big shrug! I've kept some of the nitty gritty details of how Flea's body works deliberately ambiguous, so readers can basically "headcanon" whatever they'd like on that front. (I know what I believe, of course... ^_^)

Haha! There might come a few moments with Ted where you're left thinking, "...I bet that's REAL awkward in the alternate universe where the detective's in love with him!"

Thank you again for sharing your thoughts in such detail. I hope you continue to enjoy. <3 

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I'm loving Incubus! But there's something I'd like to ask if it were possible for future chapters: can you implement something so we can change the size of the font? I have vision problems and when I've spent too much reading it hurts a bit, it would be great if I could change the font to be bigger. It's just a suggestion of course!

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This would be a great accessibility feature! Unfortunately, due to the way the screens are composed, changing the font size dynamically is not a simple switch. It would be a huge undertaking. I'd love to do it! But I just don't have the time or means right now.

However, there is a built-in engine feature that lets you override font type and size. In-game, press shift + A to open the accessibility menu and you can mess around with the text size there. Just be aware that the game wasn't designed for that, so it will push some text out of alignment, and the effect will be worse the larger the font size.

Hope that at least helps a little!

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Welp, now I'm madly in love with an incubus, so I've got that going for me. 

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These things happen.

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I am so hooked on this story.

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<3 Thank you for playing!

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I can't wait for chapter 4! It says TBA... :c lol

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It's coming out tomorrow!

Awesome!!! Thank You!!! :*

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Everytime Flea calls the MC detective it feels like Lucifer Morningstar calling Chloe, and I love it!

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Ooh, I'm assuming that's Lucifer? I haven't seen it, but that feels like it checks out!

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Yeessss! And I love older and tougher protagonists! It gives Dana Scully and Clarice Starling vibes! 😍 I can't wait for the sequel, the story is amazing!

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just finished all three chapters and i. am. HOOKED! so good! :) can't wait for more!

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Ooh, I love to hear it! Thank you!

I went to download chapter 3 for PC and it keeps saying there is a virus? I had no issues with 1 or 2 and wondered what could be wrong. 

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Sometimes antivirus is just awkward like that. I’ve just downloaded the file to be sure and there’s no problem on my end. You can try adjusting or disabling your antivirus software for the download/extraction if you feel comfortable with that. Sorry—it’s a pain when this happens, I know.

okay thank you. I will try it as I do love your games and trust them. Just surprised me as I've never had the issue before. 🙃 

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Ahh! I've been following back since Wilder and I'm so happy to see you return to storytelling! I really love the ability to choose options as if it were a regular otome game. I can't tell you how many times I would read romance books/ fanfic and wish I could just choose the dialogue. I love the banter and relationship between MC and Flea. I love their slow build of warmth, love, and finding a home to belong to in each other. I can't wait for the next installment! That being said, do please take as much time as you need! No pressure, just have fun! ^^

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Aw, thank you so much! Yeah, I got back into reading in a big way at the end of last year and it really reignited my passion for writing interactive stories. I really hope you enjoy Flea and the detective's journey together. ^_^

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I'm guessing this year might be a great one for us both creatively then! I was in both a reading and artistic rut for years, and then all of a sudden everything seemed to have lifted. Now I'm doing plenty of reading and drawing! ^v^ I'll definitely be checking in from time to time to see if there is more of Flea and the detectives journey! <333

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Delighted to see you still making games, I think the last time I must've read one of your works has to be like... seven years ago? You're still knocking it out of the park. Looking forward to reading more. :)

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Oh, thank you! <3

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God, that was perfect. Flea did exactly what I hoped he would do and saved my dumb Detective from a stupid, anger driven mistake. Then said Detective discovered some new unfortunate kinks that night, ones he'll probably deny to the end of days . But at the same time, he's starting to really fall for Flea.

I just love that I can play this hot/cold, snarky, stubborn, lonely and repressed detective who is falling hard for Flea despite his better judgement. I love that he can deny everything, but secretly is completely becoming wrapped around Flea's finger. He's already offering to cook for him and would even probably buy Flea clothes and give him a key to his place. And he'd probably do it all without realizing he was doing it. And then die of embarrassment if Ted points it out to him.

However...Flea is NEVER to mention the spanking again. He definitely did NOT like it. And that's all that should be said. He also absolutely did not like the 'leash'.....................Oh god... *detective dies shamefully in a corner blushing*

Also, thank you for the praise kink! Flea deserves praise and love.

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Oh, I'm glad you enjoyed it! It's a fun contrast you're describing and I hope you continue to enjoy the evolving dynamic between Flea and your detective. ^_^

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Wow. The writing on this is just so expressive and incredible. 

Thank you so much!

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I love the character developement 🥰

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I'm glad!

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I love it, it's so amazing, especially with our incubus Flea :D I love him, he went from being a brat to be a sweetling :) I'm looking forward to more adventures with him and MC :D

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Yay! There’ll be plenty more bratty moments to go with the sweet…

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Of course. We demand sour and sweet. Only way Flea can continue to worm his way into my detective's heart. Just like the cat. Detective seems to have a weakness for pretty and bratty. xD

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I'm really enjoying this so far, especially with how flavorful the options are.

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I'm glad! Thanks very much.

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This was so cute. I love Flea!!!

Yay! <3

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finding such a good story is so fulfilling 

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That's very kind. Thank you!

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*sobs incoherently*

okay but this was wrapped up so well!!! ted is precious and i'm so in love with flea and the entire story and he actually gave us a kiss goodbye oh my GOD i'm about to sob again

bravo!!! keep cooking, you!!! however long it takes, it's always worth it!!!

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Ahh, thank you! Loved writing the kiss goodbye.

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MY HEART IS BREAKING AND BEING PUT BACK TOGETHER i am utterly OBSESSED with your writing i can't wait for the next chapter ugh <3 

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Wow! Thank you. <3

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You're genuinely a favorite author of mine. I'm so excited to keep reading that I've already replayed all three chapters! lmao

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Thank you so much! <3

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So good, thank you for the yummy meal. Will try to wait patiently for the next.

You're welcome! ^_^

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This might be my favorite chapter so far I love how sweet Flea and MCs interactions were.

Aw, thank you! I enjoyed writing some softer stuff this chapter.

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Just popping out of lurkdom to say thanks for another great one. Ted meeting Flea was by far my fave moment and I'm so looking forward to many more awkward meetings between these 2.

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Thank YOU! I pretty much adore any scene that puts Flea and Ted in the same room, so I hope you enjoy 'em too!

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I want more of Ted bullying my Detective about his new 'boyfriend'. xD

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This chapter was just as amazing as the last two, so excited every time a new one comes out, and can't wait for more!

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Thank you so much!

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I am loving this! I'm so excited for the next chapter!

Yay! <3

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Another great installment! I love seeing their relationship change over time. Looking forward to their next adventure!

Thank you! <3

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my heart is weak for Flea.. i love how we’re getting closer 🥹 cant wait until they start realizing they’re falling for each other. SO EXCITED 

Oh, me too!!

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having so much fun with this series so far! the writing and characterization is so good and now im completely hooked on flea 😅 hes such a cutie in both writing and art 🥰 thank you for this if!!

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Oh, thank YOU! I'm so glad Flea, the disaster he is, has his fans.

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WOOOHOOO cant wait until im done with work!

Hope you enjoy!

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