Does this mean I will have to wait for the next one in August?! Gosh, I binged the game in 2 days. Loved your previous games so I knew this was gonna be banger LOL
God I wish there was a better way to do episodic releases. I hate having to go back and read each part individually when the new release comes out. I get the business model of it all, just very inconvenient for the reader.
ooooooh my fucking god, poor Detective - finally they're getting to grow into a genuine & healthy relationship with Flea and past the unhealthy coping mechanism with Ted ... only for Detective to not only get sucked into a repeating nightmare of the worst day of their life, but then have Ted find out about their fucked up feelings. Goddamn. You are a devious motherfucker in the best way. I mean, I should've seen it coming - how could you let a story beat that juicy go untapped - but I totally fucking didn't and you got me good! That's going to be one fucking awful dinner with the in-laws - can't wait to see it!
And having mentioned that genuine & healthy relationship with Flea - goddamn. Goddamn goddamn. His domestic fucking ass talking about laundry pre-bone got me good. Just the simple joy of loving and being loved - of people carving out a life together... and Detective showing Flea their drawings and it's just all of Flea?! Loved how you revisted that later in Flea's POV - but I especially enjoyed the restraint with which you described the Detective's perception of Flea's reaction when they showed him. You're really, really good at letting the audience do the feeling - you don't tell us where the characters are at emotionally, but instead guide us to it in a way that leads us to connection & empathy. That's my pretentious way of putting it, anyway. But it's something I'm always itching for in writing and you're really, really good at it.
On a less pretentious note - I also loved Tabby trying to warn Flea something was wrong. In a world with demons walking about in it, cats truly would be supernatural geiger counters. As someone who also has a dumbass cat that loves my partner more than me, loving the representation here.
So excited for the next chapter & to see where this all goes! And then reread it all over again once it's done!
Yesss, I wanted it to be the exact right time to really hit the detective where it hurts. Thanks so much for letting me know the parts that really worked for you!
I mean, I'm beyond happy we finally got Flea to drop his trick. I guess my Alex DOES have a slight fetish for demon Flea. And while I'm never into vore, Alex got a little excited just cause it was Flea in his demon form. He really does have a thing for those spikes. xD
Otherwise, I really loved the Fear Demon and the whole part of being trapped in the nightmare. It was subtle enough that if I let myself think on it at first, I would have noticed, but since I didn't...I was slowly led into the realization when Alex became trapped and couldn't wake up. Very nicely done.
But that Fear Demon had another thing coming if he thought Alex was going to give up Flea to him. Sure, you can easily drag Alex down, but go after the ppl he cares about and he goes into protect and attack mode. xD
Will be interesting now to see how Ted deals with the realization that Alex was always right about the demons. And that he now has a Demon Roommate that he's dating. Oh kids and the lovers they bring home.... =P
Thank you so much for the detailed feedback! Heh. I'm just imagining Ted walking through the door and Josie saying, "Hey, honey--how was your day?" And Ted just... staring helplessly while he tries to work out how to even BEGIN with that...
This is my favourite chapter by far! I can't wait for the next one...
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I have to say I wish MC's love confession to Ted had more dialogue. Like, MC bares their soul to the man they've loved for years (Yes, I know he's married! Lol) and he just kind of chides MC and avoids even touching their shoulder... (Maybe I'm just butthurt, but damn that's so cold). I understand he's just experienced some severe trauma that's altered his perception of reality forever lol (and I know you're probably cookin' something good for the next chapter-- and I know Ted's not a real love interest, yes!).
Don't get me wrong I LOVE Flea and I know you can only add so much angst in one chapter. I love how organic the love between Flea and MC is. I guess I'm just messy and love maximum drama because I'm trash lol.
That being said I love your writing and I'm really sad there's only 2(?) chapters left 😭 how will I go on without my boys?
Haha! I understand the frustration of it, and the lack of satisfaction, but... I guess that's kind of what I was going for. To really kick you in the gut with how doomed those feelings always were--not just to never be reciprocated, but to be something that never should've been brought out into the light. I get your pain, though--I really get it. <3
Loving the horror elements on this one! The vore in particular almost made my lunch come back up. Your ability to be sexy, horrific and funny really came through in this chapter. Thank you for blessing us with your writing.
;3; My cuties<333 I'm so happy to see Flea slowly allowing himself to become soft and loved. Becoming vulnerable, especially with trauma is so hard and scary. Although I don't have The Detective's particular trauma, it all felt the same as my fight, fight, freeze response for mine. I could also relate to Flea being scared but yearning to be seen by the person they care for as well. As always I love your writing and eagerly look forward to the next one! Definitely take as much time as you need to write and have fun! ^v^
(PS: I love that the menu has Flea in his relaxed appearance)
They have very unusual lives, but a lot of their vulnerabilities are very relatable, I think--so I'm really glad something is resonating there. <3 Take care of yourself! <3
Sonnet another incredible chapter that was well worth the wait. Seeing how Flea and the detective's relationship has evolved in this chapter is so sweet. Their dynamic is probably one of my favorites when it comes to the IFs I've read. I also really enjoyed Ted in this chapter that poor man is so stressed I hope MC gets the chance to talk it out over dinner with the in laws (wink wink) I'm also very happy about the chance to have Flea in his true form thank you!!!!! Last thing I swear but the ART FOR THIS CHAPTER!!!!! He looks so good I could cry lmao special shoutout to your artist.
That is such a compliment! Thank you so much. And I agree the cover art this chapter is gorgeous and encapsulates a new side of Flea so well. Vic's an amazing artist!
This was so beautiful, and Flea and MC are so connected with each other, their love and friendship evolve and becomes so much deeper each episode, it's so amazingly wonderful <3 I love our sweet incubus so so much <3
utterly magnificent. i didn't think i could love flea or this story even more. happy to be proven wrong. i love how much the relationship has progressed 😭💕
I literally binged this game from to chapter 1 to 7. Thank you so much!! I've been playing your game since aloners and I'm so glad you kept creating games ever since!! I love how flea and mc's relationship has been evolving and how mc's feelings toward Ted involves in the story. Please keep up the great work and please make sure to take plenty of breaks and rest!
Why was this posted right when im getting on a plane crying right now 😭😭😭😭 (thank you so much for the new chapter, I love them so much!!!!!) ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Was finally able to play it was soooo cute I loved it so much. I'm so ready and excited to see how that dinner scene with the "parents" go❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ (your work is amazing and I wish many blessings on you❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️)
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Ugh, I'm obsessed with this story. Cannot wait for the next chapter!
Aw, thank you! I'm so glad you're enjoying!
awww it went by so fast. so sad i have to wait again...
Thanks for playing! Hope the wait’s not too rough on you.
Does this mean I will have to wait for the next one in August?! Gosh, I binged the game in 2 days. Loved your previous games so I knew this was gonna be banger LOL
Aw, thank you! I'm not sure when the next chapter will be out just yet. It's still in the writing stage.
Flea <3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3
He's a good boy, huh?
The best!!!!!
God I wish there was a better way to do episodic releases. I hate having to go back and read each part individually when the new release comes out. I get the business model of it all, just very inconvenient for the reader.
I mean... you could always just wait until it's finished?
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ooooooh my fucking god, poor Detective - finally they're getting to grow into a genuine & healthy relationship with Flea and past the unhealthy coping mechanism with Ted ... only for Detective to not only get sucked into a repeating nightmare of the worst day of their life, but then have Ted find out about their fucked up feelings. Goddamn. You are a devious motherfucker in the best way. I mean, I should've seen it coming - how could you let a story beat that juicy go untapped - but I totally fucking didn't and you got me good! That's going to be one fucking awful dinner with the in-laws - can't wait to see it!
And having mentioned that genuine & healthy relationship with Flea - goddamn. Goddamn goddamn. His domestic fucking ass talking about laundry pre-bone got me good. Just the simple joy of loving and being loved - of people carving out a life together... and Detective showing Flea their drawings and it's just all of Flea?! Loved how you revisted that later in Flea's POV - but I especially enjoyed the restraint with which you described the Detective's perception of Flea's reaction when they showed him. You're really, really good at letting the audience do the feeling - you don't tell us where the characters are at emotionally, but instead guide us to it in a way that leads us to connection & empathy. That's my pretentious way of putting it, anyway. But it's something I'm always itching for in writing and you're really, really good at it.
On a less pretentious note - I also loved Tabby trying to warn Flea something was wrong. In a world with demons walking about in it, cats truly would be supernatural geiger counters. As someone who also has a dumbass cat that loves my partner more than me, loving the representation here.
So excited for the next chapter & to see where this all goes! And then reread it all over again once it's done!
Yesss, I wanted it to be the exact right time to really hit the detective where it hurts. Thanks so much for letting me know the parts that really worked for you!
Yesss...that episode was so good. <3
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I mean, I'm beyond happy we finally got Flea to drop his trick. I guess my Alex DOES have a slight fetish for demon Flea. And while I'm never into vore, Alex got a little excited just cause it was Flea in his demon form. He really does have a thing for those spikes. xD
Otherwise, I really loved the Fear Demon and the whole part of being trapped in the nightmare. It was subtle enough that if I let myself think on it at first, I would have noticed, but since I didn't...I was slowly led into the realization when Alex became trapped and couldn't wake up. Very nicely done.
But that Fear Demon had another thing coming if he thought Alex was going to give up Flea to him. Sure, you can easily drag Alex down, but go after the ppl he cares about and he goes into protect and attack mode. xD
Will be interesting now to see how Ted deals with the realization that Alex was always right about the demons. And that he now has a Demon Roommate that he's dating. Oh kids and the lovers they bring home.... =P
Thank you so much for the detailed feedback! Heh. I'm just imagining Ted walking through the door and Josie saying, "Hey, honey--how was your day?" And Ted just... staring helplessly while he tries to work out how to even BEGIN with that...
This is my favourite chapter by far! I can't wait for the next one...
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I have to say I wish MC's love confession to Ted had more dialogue. Like, MC bares their soul to the man they've loved for years (Yes, I know he's married! Lol) and he just kind of chides MC and avoids even touching their shoulder... (Maybe I'm just butthurt, but damn that's so cold). I understand he's just experienced some severe trauma that's altered his perception of reality forever lol (and I know you're probably cookin' something good for the next chapter-- and I know Ted's not a real love interest, yes!).
Don't get me wrong I LOVE Flea and I know you can only add so much angst in one chapter. I love how organic the love between Flea and MC is. I guess I'm just messy and love maximum drama because I'm trash lol.
That being said I love your writing and I'm really sad there's only 2(?) chapters left 😭 how will I go on without my boys?
Haha! I understand the frustration of it, and the lack of satisfaction, but... I guess that's kind of what I was going for. To really kick you in the gut with how doomed those feelings always were--not just to never be reciprocated, but to be something that never should've been brought out into the light. I get your pain, though--I really get it. <3
Loving the horror elements on this one! The vore in particular almost made my lunch come back up. Your ability to be sexy, horrific and funny really came through in this chapter. Thank you for blessing us with your writing.
Ooh, thank you so much! That particular scene had been percolating in my head for a looong time.
;3; My cuties<333 I'm so happy to see Flea slowly allowing himself to become soft and loved. Becoming vulnerable, especially with trauma is so hard and scary. Although I don't have The Detective's particular trauma, it all felt the same as my fight, fight, freeze response for mine. I could also relate to Flea being scared but yearning to be seen by the person they care for as well. As always I love your writing and eagerly look forward to the next one! Definitely take as much time as you need to write and have fun! ^v^
(PS: I love that the menu has Flea in his relaxed appearance)
They have very unusual lives, but a lot of their vulnerabilities are very relatable, I think--so I'm really glad something is resonating there. <3 Take care of yourself! <3
Sonnet another incredible chapter that was well worth the wait. Seeing how Flea and the detective's relationship has evolved in this chapter is so sweet. Their dynamic is probably one of my favorites when it comes to the IFs I've read. I also really enjoyed Ted in this chapter that poor man is so stressed I hope MC gets the chance to talk it out over dinner with the in laws (wink wink) I'm also very happy about the chance to have Flea in his true form thank you!!!!! Last thing I swear but the ART FOR THIS CHAPTER!!!!! He looks so good I could cry lmao special shoutout to your artist.
That is such a compliment! Thank you so much. And I agree the cover art this chapter is gorgeous and encapsulates a new side of Flea so well. Vic's an amazing artist!
^ I bet that's Flea when we're not looking.
This was so beautiful, and Flea and MC are so connected with each other, their love and friendship evolve and becomes so much deeper each episode, it's so amazingly wonderful <3 I love our sweet incubus so so much <3
I'm so glad the relationship development is hitting. <3
utterly magnificent. i didn't think i could love flea or this story even more. happy to be proven wrong. i love how much the relationship has progressed 😭💕
Kinda crazy to think where they started...
This was so amazing, each chapter just gets better and better and I absolutely cannot wait until the next one!
Aw, thank you so much!
I literally binged this game from to chapter 1 to 7. Thank you so much!! I've been playing your game since aloners and I'm so glad you kept creating games ever since!! I love how flea and mc's relationship has been evolving and how mc's feelings toward Ted involves in the story. Please keep up the great work and please make sure to take plenty of breaks and rest!
Oh, wow, thank you! <3 I'm so glad you like the evolution of the story.
i love this update so much! the domesticity with flea his reaction if we give him affection 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
Somehow we've morphed into "boyfriend simulator (with a side of demons)". ^^;
And it's the best thing to happen to me in my life
Whoa, you’re on fire recently. So excited for the new update!
Hope it's a good one!
i haven't read this chapter yet and i already know it's gonna be a bangerrrr
I hope you enjoy!
Just finished the chapter. He's so beautiful😭😭😭
He is beautiful!
So happy for the update, unfortunately i dont have access to my laptop for at least a week 😭😭
Oh, no! Well, the chapter will still be here. <3
Why was this posted right when im getting on a plane crying right now 😭😭😭😭 (thank you so much for the new chapter, I love them so much!!!!!) ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Thank you! Hope you enjoy once you get to play!
Was finally able to play it was soooo cute I loved it so much. I'm so ready and excited to see how that dinner scene with the "parents" go❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ (your work is amazing and I wish many blessings on you❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️)
Aw, I'm glad you enjoyed! <3 Yeah, that's gonna be one awkward night, right?
AAAAAAAAA ON MY WAY TO BUY IT AND PLAY :D
<3 Thank you!